Thought while reading

I am currently reading Robin Hobb's book Fool's Errand. Concurrently, I have been reading the subreddit for fantasy on Reddit.com. Those two verbs intersected tonight, and I wanted to share a thought or so about them.

1. Robin Hobb has been accused by certain redditors of bringing her reader along too slowly in the plot of her novels. She is completely unafraid of narrative and simple, everyday things happening to her characters. In Fool's Errand, I reached page 153 before anything of great and lasting plot importance entered into the novel. For some readers, that would mean that this book has been boring and slow. For me, it means that Hobb is unafraid to be inside of her character's head. Fitz, the main character in her previous 3 novels and this one, is a broken man who has experienced the greatest of tragic adventures in his life. He hangs onto sorrow and guilt, withdraws himself from the world, and experiences small pleasures like an ordinary person. Reading about his life is interesting to me because Hobb has made Fitz into a person. He is not simply a vessel of action, or a conduit for the plot to flow through. He is a man who has thoughts and experiences that must be understood to fully realize him. I love that.

2. In much the same way, I think that this idea is applied by fantasy authors in more instances than is perhaps normal when compared to authors of other genres. Lets consider two authors: R.A. Salvatore, and Robert Jordan.

• Salvatore is the author of the Drizz't Do'Urden series of fantasy novels. There are a million of them, and Salvatore is seen in some circles as less than a literary genius. His writing does have simple D&D and hack and slash elements in it, but in the course of his publishing career he has stayed with the same characters for 25+ books. That has given him the time to let them change, to experience tragedy and triumph, and to share those emotions with the reader through narrative. These books were a large part of my formative years in reading as I learned that character development and action can go hand in hand.

• Robert Jordan has been criticized for the slow middle-third of his Wheel of Time series. I couldn't be more confused by people who feel this. All of the hundreds of pages that Jordan supposedly "wastes" in the middle 3-5 books is spent following characters through decisions both big and small. These decisions change their lives, allow us to know the characters more fully, and therefore allow us to be drawn completely into their world.

I cannot express more strongly how much I love that, or how important that is to readers. Literature is more than metaphors and veiled allusions. Literature is living vicariously (in a good way) through characters that make you feel and experience emotions that are important to the human experience.

Hornets @ Spurs (11/7/2015)

As Jon Bois would say (he of Breaking Madden fame) “It's College Football Saturday!” As the rest of the sports world watches the Alabama-LSU game, we Hornets fans watched them trot into the arena in San Antonio to face the Spurs. They haven’t beaten the spurs in an eon or two, but hoped to fare better this time, coming off of two decisive victories over the Bulls and Mavs. My thoughts:

• It must be a rule that a team has to have an atrocious alternate. The Spurs yellow-camo-sleeved uniforms tonight were really awful. Note: Every Hornet’s uniform is awesome.
• Another trend that I mentioned last game was the 1st quarter hot hand. Tonight it was Kemba Walker. He was very aggressive starting out, especially in his forays to the rim, and finished the quarter with 12 points.
• No major revelation here, but when you turn the ball over, you tend to lose. The Hornets had 15 turnovers, which is egregious, but is more than they would like to average. Perhaps that is a byproduct of running more and passing the ball more, but you would like to see that number go down.
• Spurs are so good at executing. They shot 55% in the first half, and just move the ball so crisply. They are especially good at making the extra pass. Example: assist numbers (35 assists on 45 FG. WOW)
• As hope still lingered in my breast, the 2nd half of the third quarter happened. The Spurs ran a blitzkrieg  and were suddenly up 17 at the end of the third quarter. Manu Ginobili, Patty Mills, and David West dominated the Hornets second unit. This was absolutely the story of the game. The Hornet’s bench had no punch, and the Spurs’ bench looked like All Stars. Hopefully this is a scoring blip for the Hornets, and not a trend of struggling to hit shots and get stops.

Negative: We couldn’t get a stop tonight. The bench couldn’t score. There just didn’t seem to be a ton of fight from this team tonight; when the Spurs got hot, the Hornets just didn’t respond.

Positive: Uh...Frank got some nice burn at the end there. Kemba scored the ball really well, and the starting five generally looked decent.

Moving Forward: PJ Hairston needs to find some confidence in his shot. Remember the D-League, PJ? Score the ball! This team also needs to dedicate itself to the defensive end of the floor. The Spurs are a fantastic team, but they shot over 55% from the floor, which is well above a league average mark.

Hornets vs Mavericks (11/05/2015)

Behold! The mighty shall journey to the land of dust and desert. To the land of cows and cactus. They shall face the mighty, struggle, and they shall overcome (They did!). I watched the Mavericks and the Hornets, and I had these thoughts:

• The Hornets always seem to have one hot hand in the first quarter lately. The last couple of games it's been Nicolas Batum, and this night it was Al Jefferson. He finished the opening period with 11 points on six shots. Really nice showing for him as he looked bouncy early, and late. He finished the game with an incredibly efficient 31 points on 18 shots.
• The shooting. It was pretty poor from 3 pt range (I have slight issues with Batum’s shot selection. Likes to dribble into them a lot.) The team finished with 6 three point baskets on 27 attempts (22.2%)
• The energy of Marvin Williams this season has been awesome, and it's really a testament to him working so hard in the off-season. I was an advocate of Cody Zeller being a starter again, but Marvin has really earned his minutes. He is leading this team in 3 pt makes, and in rebounding. He has turned himself into a great offensive stretch 4 for this team. (I still want a rim protector though.)
• Speaking of a rim protector, Powell killed us at the rim in the first half. BUT, the Hornets dominated points in the paint 58 to 36.
• Bench scoring came totally from 3 people. Zeller had 11, Lin had 7, and Lamb scored 16. Those were the only bench points, period. I don’t think it is a terribly big deal, as Hawes played 18 minutes in a supporting role, but the more the ball can be moved around the court, the better.
• Final Note: Zeller almost got killed for the second game in a row. That young man does not care about his body. Last game Noah tried to give him the people’s elbow, and tonight Deron Williams shoved him in the air on a fast break. Ouch.

Summary: The Hornets won their second game in a row! They are looking pretty smooth on offense, and the added fire power is definitely a big reason for that. The team really took control of this game during the 3rd quarter, where they outscored the Mavericks by 10 and never gave up that lead. The Hornets will try to continue their excellence against the very excellent San Antonio Spurs next.

Let me know what you think! Any thoughts on my thoughts?

Bulls vs Hornets (11/3/2015)

Harnessing the power of the mind is one thing. Harnessing the power of the body by using the mind is something else altogether. The concreteness of purpose and strength of mental discipline in professional athletes is something that is stunning in its scope. Tonight, despite my many past admonitions of mistakes and mental lapses, I acknowledge the vast physical and mental superiority of the players I am about to watch. While I watched I had these thoughts:

• The Hornets opened up this game moving the ball really crisply. 17 points in the first 9 minutes, and you have to wonder if PJ was given a wake up call by not having his option picked up. He never looks lazy, but tonight he looked aggressive. (Team finished the first quarter with 37!!!!!! points.)
• Lin is the only player on the team who consistently attempts to get all the way to the rim. I like his aggressive nature. We have a lot of drive and kick players who only want to kick, so Lin is a nice change of pace for this team.
• HOT! This team had a first half that you dream of. They hit 8 3’s, had 17 assists, finished the first 24 minutes with only 2 turnovers, and only allowed 47 first half points. That is a coach's dream right there!
• Zeller was bloodied tonight by a Joakim Noah elbow. Got him right in the nose/forehead and that thing bled like a sieve! He was looking energetic tonight before that blow sent him to the locker room. But no fear! He got 8 stitches and was back in the second half.
• You have to approve of the risk that the Hornets took in signing Jeremy Lamb to a contract extension yesterday. He is a scoring guard with length, and the Hornets know that he can be a scoring cog off the bench without batting an eye. Lamb was FIRE against the Bulls, basically scoring whenever he wanted to, and finished with a team high 20 points
• The new guys were all great tonight. Lamb is documented above, Lin as well. Hawes made up for some of his terribleness against the Hawks with some nice offensive play, and Batum really looked like a number one/two option for much of the night.

Overall, the Hornets just dominated this game. They out shot, assisted, rebounded, stole, and blocked the Bulls. The movement was crisp, and it made the defense look good on a night where they gave up 100. The teams were simply moving too fast for the defense to be solid. There are always things to work on, but the Hornets have to be encouraged by this offensive explosion as they move forward in the season.

P.S. Remember that shooting thing? The Hornets shot 14 for 23 from 3 point range tonight.

Hawks vs Hornets (11/01/2015)

I attended this game at Time Warner Cable Arena in Charlotte, so I have fewer thoughts than normal. However, in the midst of the spilled tears and sadness at the hands of the Atlanta Hawks, I have couple of thoughts.

• Marvin Williams is really holding on to his starting job so far. This afternoon, he hit 5 3’s and had 3 blocked shots. Pretty solid outing for him, and he is the leading three point shooter on this team so far.
• I know that real sports writers like Zach Lowe have commented on the Hornets color scheme and court design already, but it really is amazing. The beehive court combined with purple and teal really is one of the great color schemes in the League. Unlike the Hawks new unis, which are atrocious.
• It is always fun to be in an arena. The players look more athletic, the noise drives you to hysterical levels, and some dancers are better than no dancers! (My wife refuses to be the timeout dancer for me)

The Hornets have started out 0-3, and Coach Clifford talked after the game about players being organized and having to know what they are doing on the court at all times. There are definitely some large negatives with this team, but the season is still young, and the hope that this team will gel and become a team that can legitimately win games against talent still lives on.

Hornets vs Hawks (10/30/2015)

Another day! Another game. Tonight the Hornets visited the Atlanta Hawks, the so-called “Spurs East” and their all powerful coach Mike Budenholzer. What transpired, my bullet points shall tell. With Jeremy Lamb returning to a usable level of ankle stability, the Hornets saw some small changes in the lineup when compared with Game 1. Through the course of the game, the Hornets did show some solid fight as they struggled through and made it a game late in the 4th quarter, with a last second three just missing. Assorted thoughts:

• It was great listening to the Hornet’s new television broadcast crew. I had zero problems with last year’s play by play man Steve Martin, but Eric Collins did what a play by play guys is supposed to: act excited, and ask leading questions for the color analysts. Certainly acceptable. Stephanie Ready was due for a more important role with the team, and she really showed solid knowledge and timing. She and Dell Curry will have to work on their rapport with each other, but they should be solid together, both bringing a unique perspective.
• Shooting: This may be a subject that we talk about 82 times this season. I WILL be keeping an eye on the 3pt percentage throughout the year, and the number of threes that we are shooting. For the game, the Hornets shot 30 threes, and hit 12 of them. That is a totally acceptable number!
• As much as there are arguments against Marvin Williams playing minutes at the four, you can see why he is on the floor. He gets a lot of open looks in the Hornets offense by sliding out to the perimeter around pick and rolls, and he rewarded Coach Clifford tonight with 13 pts (3 3’s) and 11 rebounds.
• Batum: He looked awesome early in this game. He stole the opening tip for a bucket plus the foul, then continued to play aggressively in the first quarter. He did not look great for much of the rest of the game, and finished with 7 turnovers.
• Lamb: Jeremy Lamb was the 2nd quarter Batum. 8 points on three straight possessions! he scored once in the 4th, but I am sure he will be worked more regularly into the rotation as his ankle gets healthier.
• Zeller: He was bad tonight. When Cody isn’t effective on the boards, and when his jumper isn’t falling...
• TURNOVERS! The Hawks some some excellent defenders, and they were aggressive in this game. Additionally, the Hornets kept getting trapped in corners, or stuck without a dribble in poor spots, it was really an ugly passing game. The team finished with 18 total turnovers.
• BIG OPINION: This is game 2 of 82. Lets all calm down a little bit. The Hawks and Heat are top 4 teams in the East this year, so we can't freak out when we lose to teams like that. We have mistakes to fix, but this isn't hair-pulling bad yet.

This game was in reach until the end of the 3rd quarter. The Hornets of last year were a team who went through large scoring slumps, and they fell into that trap tonight. Coach Cliff will have to keep finding a way to manufacture offense in those periods. On the other end, our defense is hopefully still in the throes of birth. These guys should work better together as the season goes on, and can be a little more prompt on rotations. On to the Home Opener on Sunday!

Hornets vs Heat (10/28/2015)

There is something inviting about fall. Consider the forest. In the spring and the summer, the forest is full of life and growth and noise. There are brambles and nettles and hordes of mosquitoes, squirrels and birds make their raucous calls to their brethren, and the heat of the day pounds through the canopy above you. Then comes the fall and all of those things still. The forest becomes a place of peace. The brambles and nettles are dead, the animals are retreating towards their winter homes, and the sun has released the world into a gentle cool. You can walk unmolested in the woods (Unless you look like a deer. Wear some orange) and simply exist without interruption.

Then the peace of fall is startled by the full throated call of the NBA! It appears, running through the shadows like Cody Zeller on a full court break to the rim!

Game one of an NBA season is such an exciting time. The players are new, the fans feel renewed, and the record is pristine. No heartbreak has happened (cough MKG cough) and we can imagine our Hornets slipping into the #7 or #8 spot in the playoffs. It may unfold!

GAME 1 Notes

• Al Jefferson can still score. He had 13 in the 1st quarter, and finished the game with 17 after a very slow second half. In fact, as the Hornets went into catch up mode in the 4th quarter, Marvin Williams and Cody Zeller shared the floor for much of that time.
• Shooting: Not as good as we had hoped...The Hornets shot 6 for 24 from three point range. That percentage is not going to cut it, especially when the opposition hit twice as many threes at a 60% clip.
• Defensively, the Hornets were kind of terrible, but not wretched. They definitely miss a rim protector. There is not intimidating presence at the rim, and the Heat scored inside quite a bit. 40 of their 104 points were scored inside the paint. While this is less than the Hornets, the Heat do not have a post up threat like big Al. Their paint points came from penetration and lobs.
• The Heat have a great bench. Gerald Green is the perfect 6th man, and Josh McRoberts only makes that second unit hum smoother. They will win a lot of games in the East, and in the league as a whole.
• Nic Batum guarded Dwayne Wade for the majority of the 2nd half, and did a reasonable job. It is excellent to see Batum already assuming that responsibility.

As the season goes on, I will do my best to incorporate some advanced statistics, perhaps some more storytelling techniques, and of course some gimmicks to keep you internet wolves satisfied.